Sunday, April 17, 2016


Scary Poem

That poem frightens me
from the first simile.

Each metaphor
strikes fear to my core.

I’m deeply disturbed
by one evil verb.

The rhymes of that verse
make me fear the worst.

No use pretending:
I dread the ending.

3 comments:

  1. Ralph Fletcher, I liked how in your scary poem, you were using writing skills like a verb, rhymes, verse and a metaphor in your poem.
    From Joshua (AES)
    Grade 4

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    1. Thanks Joshua. Good noticing! I think the poem is a little bit funny, too. Do you agree?

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  2. This poem reminded me of when you get to a high level book you get scared.

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